“Would you like to dance?” he says.
I’m sitting in a country/western bar with my best friend, S., and my dad’s girlfriend. The man standing at our table is tall and lanky. He wears a plaid shirt, a wide silver belt buckle, dusty jeans, and cowboy boots. I assume he drives a pickup or a Grand Prix. He looks at least ten years older than my 22 year old self.
“Sure,” I said. My dad’s girlfriend thinks I never date. I suspect she is starting to think I have no interest in men, but she’s too nice to say. She nudges my best friend’s arm. “Well, would you look at that,” she says.
On the dance floor, the man holds my hand and puts his other hand on my waist. He’s a gentleman though and doesn’t stand too close. We make small talk and I glance over at the table and dad’s girlfriend and S. are whispering to each other and watching me.
The slow song ends. “One more dance?” he asks. I nod before I realize what the next song is. The song is Strokin’ by Clarence Carter, and my stomach drops and my face burns red. I think of walking of the dance floor, but neither do I want to look uptight. I can take a joke, right? I’m a modern girl, yes?
I look at dad’s girlfriend and S. They are laughing. Well, it is just a song. The man smiles at me, and I do what I’m best at–pretend I don’t notice anything.
When the song ends, the man says something to me, but I don’t listen. “Thanks, but I really need to sit down,” I say, more to the floor than to him, and walk away.
In real life I’ll do close to anything to avoid conflict, but obviously this doesn’t work in a story. Sometimes I wonder if I don’t stir up too much trouble between characters, putting disasters together and figuring out if all turns out well or otherwise. Sometimes I worry I haven’t caused my characters enough trouble, but I don’t want to go over the top.
Where is the top? How do you know you’ve taken the reader far enough?
In other news…I keep tweaking the fiction blog (go figure), and have added brief descriptions of the other novels I’ve written. Since I’m trying to decide which one to edit next, please consider leaving a comment about which one sounds the most intriguing. (If they all sound like train wrecks, please, like my son says, keep it in your brain.)