I try to see how many tags I can leave out and still be clear. It is easier when there are only two characters and they are opposite genders. But a group conversation–that’s a killer.
During NaNo I tend to write a ton of dialogue. Or rather I write in clumps of dialogue and clumps of exposition. Then I try to sort it out. Thanks for reading the piece.
Marta Pelrine-Bacon 
Pretty cool! Very interesting – I’m curious to know what happened and where it’s going. And I love the title.
And 42k already, way to go! That’s awesome! You’re almost at the mark and still a week left. 🙂
I’m not even sure where it is all going–I often change my mind. But thank you for reading!
found this browsing the nano tags. just wanted to say i liked your excerpt. it sounds interesting:~)
Well, thank you for taking the time. And I hope it stays interesting…
That definitely piqued my interest.
And that’s a start! Thank you, Miriam, for reading.
Well, way to hook me! I love how you don’t jumble up your dialogue with “telling” tags and action beats.
I try to see how many tags I can leave out and still be clear. It is easier when there are only two characters and they are opposite genders. But a group conversation–that’s a killer.
I definitely want to hear more.
And I hope that you will. Come December we’ll see if I can make sense of it.
The setting is vivid and clear- very visual piece, even with all the dialogue.
During NaNo I tend to write a ton of dialogue. Or rather I write in clumps of dialogue and clumps of exposition. Then I try to sort it out. Thanks for reading the piece.