The inevitable excerpt… On November 22, 2009 By mapelbaIn Uncategorized For better or worse, I’ve been participating in NaNoWriMo once again. And so… here is an excerpt of The Memory Kiss. Share this:FacebookTwitterPrintEmailMoreRedditLike this:Like Loading... Related
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Pretty cool! Very interesting – I’m curious to know what happened and where it’s going. And I love the title.
And 42k already, way to go! That’s awesome! You’re almost at the mark and still a week left. 🙂
I’m not even sure where it is all going–I often change my mind. But thank you for reading!
found this browsing the nano tags. just wanted to say i liked your excerpt. it sounds interesting:~)
Well, thank you for taking the time. And I hope it stays interesting…
That definitely piqued my interest.
And that’s a start! Thank you, Miriam, for reading.
Well, way to hook me! I love how you don’t jumble up your dialogue with “telling” tags and action beats.
I try to see how many tags I can leave out and still be clear. It is easier when there are only two characters and they are opposite genders. But a group conversation–that’s a killer.
I definitely want to hear more.
And I hope that you will. Come December we’ll see if I can make sense of it.
The setting is vivid and clear- very visual piece, even with all the dialogue.
During NaNo I tend to write a ton of dialogue. Or rather I write in clumps of dialogue and clumps of exposition. Then I try to sort it out. Thanks for reading the piece.